the fall!……by.alyssakans2(a ten year old)

i am going to tell you a story and i want you to tell me if you think it is a good story.
once there was a house and by that house was a field and by that feild was a brige and under and all around that brige was a lake and the people who lived in that house had a cat and that cat was a beuatiful yung lady about the age 17.she was a white short haired cat.and she was said to be the most beuatiful cat of all.
once the cat was outside with her owner picking flowers. then they heard meowing they ran to the lake to find a cat drounding in the water the white cat laughed and the owner took of her sweater and wraped the drounding cat in it.as soon as the drounding cat got inside and dried of it took a nice long nap.it woke up to the white cat watching it.what are you doing ?said the cat that had almost dround.the cat was black and had one earing in.
i,i,i,what’s your name?said the girl.
my name is,christopher but you can call me chris,said the cat who had almost dround earlyer that day.
my name is alice,said the white cat.
later that day the cats watched movieat nightalice went to sleep on her bed.hay, what i dont get a bed?said chris.
they did not get you one yet,said alice.
well can we share?said chris. pleeaase he added.
weell,ok, said alice.and chris jumped into the bed with alice.and they bolth fell asleep with smiles on there faces.
the next day,alice woke up to chris staring at her.i have a queston,how old are you?said alice.
i am 19 said chris.
ok,said alice.
it had ben 3 weeks after that day and they were still sleeping in the same bed but they did not seem to mind.
that day they went on a walk acrossed the brige and chris said,will you be my girlfriend?alice was so exsided that she fell backwords and rolled of the brie and into the water.chris could not do anything but get help so he ran to the house and tried to get his owner but all the owner could hear was,meow,moew,moew,moew.luckuly the owner new her cats and when they cry so the owner followed the cat to find alice floating in the rivershe took of her brand new sweater andgot the cat out.
after alice was ok she ran to chris and said,yes.

TO BE CONTINUED

BY.ALYSSAKANS2
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